Shut up and kiss me

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I'm a dangerous man

I say in such a way

But she stayed

And took my hand

 

But, im a dangerous man

I cry, with a teary eye

But she said "i'll try"

And rubbed my hand

 

But I'm a horrible  man

I glared into her lovely stare

"I will never let you down!" she declared

And  wrapped  my arm around her soft neck

 

But, how can you be with me?

She looked up pleased

With the gust of wind hitting the trees

She said "shut up and kiss me"

Author's Note

this was just for fun :) say/do what ever

Reviews

[QuietPoet]

This was nice. It was sweet. She accepted you anyways and thats what its all about. =) Nicely done.

[Ashbug:)]

ooo this is gud! I reallly liked it nice job:)

[Ignorance Was Bliss Eve..]

Delicious piece.
I love the concept of it.

[Free Writer]

That is sooo sweet?!?! I seriously love this one so much!! I wana have a moment just like that and hopefully I will one day!! Another great write!! :)

[Charles D. Moorer]

This is a very intersting piece as it evoke thoughts of many things. i could not get the image of a hard boiled detective out of my mind as the grabs the dame he has just saved and she says "shut up and kiss me."

[Orahemae December]

i like it alot. just so u know u misspelled a word. its dangerous not dangeriouse. but other than the typo its great.

[Stacey Watts]

This was very well written. I think this is one of your better ones. Nicely done.

[MarkGMelvin]

thay was way cool