Shut up and kiss me

Shut up and kiss me

A Poem by J.R Schlievert
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I'm a dangerous man

I say in such a way

But she stayed

And took my hand

 

But, im a dangerous man

I cry, with a teary eye

But she said "i'll try"

And rubbed my hand

 

But I'm a horrible  man

I glared into her lovely stare

"I will never let you down!" she declared

And  wrapped  my arm around her soft neck

 

But, how can you be with me?

She looked up pleased

With the gust of wind hitting the trees

She said "shut up and kiss me"

© 2009 J.R Schlievert


Author's Note

J.R Schlievert
this was just for fun :) say/do what ever

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Wow! "Shut up and Kiss me". I wonder I would hear it from someone too. lol! =)
This is so sweet! What matters is the "love". Love despite the flaws.

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is great! I really like the repetition in the first line of each stanza. (if that makes sense). It makes the poem wayy better than its already awesomeness.
SUPER!

Posted 15 Years Ago


That's sweet. I mean, lots of people have relationships like that, where one person doesn't feel worthy, and the other builds them up. We all need a "shut up and kiss me" moment.

Posted 15 Years Ago


oh my geezie that is amazing.... im speechless

Posted 15 Years Ago


HAHAA I enjoyed it
Very unique and the concept has insight
Keep it up!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Awesome work, I truely loved this poem. Woonderfully written. I love the last line too

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like this one. It sounds like something I would do

Posted 15 Years Ago


Cracking title. It instantly made me want to read, as I like anything that starts with a verb. The first line of the poem continues the excitement in what becomes a sort of tango of passion, with the man flashing his warning signs, but with the woman only becoming the more interested the redder the warning signs become. Great stuff. Is she attracted more to his dangerous masculinity, or his honesty?

Posted 15 Years Ago


not bad...:) fun!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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O!
oooooooo this would make a wonderful scene in a film! ........

Shut up and kiss me.....tickle me......do anything...but just SHUT UP!

I wonder how many men think that about their women!>.....hahaha

x,
O!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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J.R Schlievert

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