Shut up and kiss me

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I'm a dangerous man

I say in such a way

But she stayed

And took my hand

 

But, im a dangerous man

I cry, with a teary eye

But she said "i'll try"

And rubbed my hand

 

But I'm a horrible  man

I glared into her lovely stare

"I will never let you down!" she declared

And  wrapped  my arm around her soft neck

 

But, how can you be with me?

She looked up pleased

With the gust of wind hitting the trees

She said "shut up and kiss me"

Author's Note

this was just for fun :) say/do what ever

Reviews

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

Aww What a sweet poem! I love it, and I love how she wasn't deterred by his warnings ^_^

[Misty Blue Eyes]

AWWW i love this this is sooo awesome

[qaralynn]

love it!!! great poem

[Annabray]

This is my favorite.. its really really good. =)

[Thorn]

Sweet, in a dark way.

Well done, JR. :)
Although, as usual, the uncapitalised I's bugged me a little.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i love this piece as well:)

[Patricia]

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!

[deeps]

Wow! This is so wonderful and beuatiful.
Really enjoyable read. It's cute and such a delite to read.

[Katie]

What a fun poem! It was really cute and playful. You have a lot of talent!

[River]

This is awesome. I will be honest with you and tell you the title is what caught my attention...it reminds me of something my niece yelled yesterday. lol