Space

A poem I was inspired to write upon asked what I would like to happen to my body when I die.

If and when I die,

I will not be buried in the ground.

Space may take me,

To where no being has before travelled.

No air to dilute my body,

No noise to disturb my rest.

Only exploration and miracles,

The things God only knows.

The beginning of time,

The secret of space.

I want it to be mine.

Let it comfort me in death.

Author's Note

I don't usually write free-pose, but why not?

Reviews

[Ziggy Jagger SpiderFrom..]

This is really great. I've never given much thought as to what I want to happen to my body when I die, but it is definitely an uncomfortable but still really deep concept to ponder. To me the idea of space is solacing and peaceful more than being buried in the ground. This is a really unique poem, and I am a big fan of free verse because you can just let go. For me poetry is all about letting the pain out and being able to leave reality for a while without hurting myself or getting high. Awesome poem. I don't think I've read a poem about this question before but you definitely did a great job answering the question.

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This is a very deep, introspective piece, Jared. I think we all think about this topic a lot, and I like how you brought your own light to this dark subject. Good job

[Jai Garg]

Very true when you realize this life is just an illusion.