∼ An Empty Sympathy ∼

∼ An Empty Sympathy ∼

A Poem by S Jack JA
"

- how sympathy becomes so empty -

"

An Empty Sympathy

Don’t ever offer condolences

unless they genuinely

flow from your true heart.


An insincere sentiment,

once perceived,

can inflict misery

to a deeper sense.


I prefer emptiness over insincere.

……

AEIOU-Ja

© 2024 S Jack JA


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wow that's a wow
very true empty words aren't good
your lines were perfect
another lovely writing

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

S Jack JA

2 Months Ago

I am happy that you enjoyed this short piece. I truly mean it when I write, "I prefer emptiness over.. read more

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Added on July 5, 2024
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S Jack JA
S Jack JA

Bangkok, Thailand



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Hello! My name is Suvichak, but please call me Jack. I'm excited to share my writing here on WritersCafe. English isn't my first language, so please accept my apologies for any grammar errors. I would.. more..

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