⁓ LIFE AS A MAPLE ⁓

...THE ROOTS...

In the realm

of the four natural seasons.

From Autumn to Winter,
Spring then touching Summer.

Throughout the years,
they follow a phased pattern.
All around, they give life
with their enhancing power.

Some Japanese Maples
stand majestic and serene.
Their foliage dances in red,
pink, purple, and green.

What a wonderful life
with all its charming sheen!
Just the most beautiful scene
I’ve ever seen.

Autumn, a pure moment
for Maples to root their seeds.
They will patiently wait and lull
till the winter’s cold ceases.

Then comes Spring,
which brings Maples their new green.
Just in time to celebrate
their dazzling, revived sovereign.

Isn’t there a philosophy
of the soul to appreciate?
Nature’s wisdom could guide us
through each life stage.

Anchor roots and grows
with resilience, making all symbols.
Merely a little patient...along with behold,
life will make all its wonderful show.

AEIOU-Ja               

Author's Note

As English isn't my first language, please accept my apologies for any grammar errors. Please feel free to leave your comments and recommendations. Your input is invaluable to me as I continue to grow and improve my English. Thank you!

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

You have used your non-national words in a wonderful manner, no apologies needed, can assure you. The movement of the Maple through the seasons is incredibly visual and the meter finely laid in most of your poem. You should be proud of your creativity.

[S Jack JA]

Hi Ghibran,
Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm glad you appreciated the beauty in "Life as a Maple." Crafting a single piece took me several days as I searched for the right words to express my feelings and imagination. Additionally, I spent time meticulously checking for any possible grammar errors before publishing it. A piece like this might take only a couple of hours for a native English writer. 😄 Your invaluable comment encourages me to continue working hard on my writing.
Thank you!

Jack Ja,

[emmajoygreen]

You are very welcome. from Emma

[S Jack JA]

Hi Emma,

I wanted to apologize for mistakenly addressing you by the wrong name. It's embarrassing that I didn't double-check more carefully. I appreciate your understanding.

Jack Ja,

[emmajoygreen]

Please don't be embarrassed, I smiled, wishing I could be as wise as Ghibran.

[S Jack JA]

😅😊 Thank you for your generosity.