Let Yourself to it

Evening, it was meant to be cooler then,

The dark blue color strewed from the light blue sky

And stars twinkled with all its hidden brightness, suddenly glowing the universe

Breeze started making its way through concretes

Rushing water waves steered through the bare feet,

Making the moment more peaceful and personal than ever

Yeah, it was me watching nature routine

 With all my senses embedded in understanding

And feeling all the superpowers of almighty all at once

But in loving and cheerful way………..

I heard it in the whoosh of wave

It was getting healed each second with gentleness of each puff

That patted me and gifted me the art of unseen healing

I felt less heavy and clearer

That walk dint drain me out of energy but filled me with the hope,

The view that it treats every being the same

No matter how big one has made damage to it, or how big you do to embrace it

This is the beauty of it,

There remains no difference between beings at all

Let yourself to it for while and it embraces you with all its love and leaves you healed and more positive than ever…!!!

Reviews

[Pab]

I can relate to this because the dog takes me for a walk every evening, up through the forest I live by. If I've read it right, you describe nature coming to you amid the concrete of your town or city, which is a profound idea. Nature reaches in to claim you as its own, that's the message I get from your poem. Mother Earth seeks out her children in their hiding places! I hadn't thought of things from that perspective before. Thanks for posting this.

[Queendom]

Thankyou so much....and am glad to know that you got the intended message of nature coming through concretes.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
such a positive and honest poem......
nature truly is magnificent........and holds the answer to our every question.......
well done.....
i really liked it!!!
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[Queendom]

Thankyou for such encouraging comments...!!!
This isn't enough to express nature...nature is a mighty one....hoping of coming up with even better for nature's appraisal!!!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

all the best........
you are welcome........!!!! :) :)