Happy

I made some changes. thanks for the advise.. please know it was written in a text message quickly and I had to use short hand.. thanks

 

When i wake up im happy, when i lay down at night im filled with glee. I love that ur a part of my life n just for you i give you me, its not much to anyone else, but i know you see. You see what love our unity brings, and your happy that our relationship mends. I give you these words to let you know, forever i want our love to grow.  I just hope that when you hear my name you smile and say :-)THATS MY BOO 

Reviews

[xlynne]

i liked this so much because your love for your boyfriend really shines through it. but i do agree with Ari. u and ur should be reserved for IMing only.

[Ari]

I would suggest spelling out "you" and "your". People will take you much more seriously if you do.