What IF's

Regrets of being in love at a wrong time..

WHAT IF’s

By: Janina

 

I want to forget

All the regrets in my head,

Like a falling star

Falls in the dessert

Of memories

I shouldn’t

Remember but

Always reminds me

Of the happiness

I felt when

I’m with you,

What if we continue?

What if we dare?

Can we be together?

What if…?

Reviews

[Dhaye]

You are a good writer, Janina. I like the way you throw your words on each line. I am just bothered by the word "dessert" in the 4th line. Perhaps, you misspelled it, actually you mean "desert".
In general, I still admire you because I love all My Kabayan writers here in our community.