Bloom

Bloom

A Poem by ..R.I.P..

We seemed happy
Our relationship seemed perfect
Little did everyone else know
We were falling apart

We probably could have made it
Had we really tried
But let's face it
This love really scared us

We're both so young
Neither quite yet ready to settle
There's still some growing to be done
Some lessons we both must learn

But maybe one day 
When we've had our time to grow
Fate will bring us back together
And let this love fully bloom

© 2012 ..R.I.P..


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The feeling is mind-piercing. I feel you wrote something that we are so familier through our own experiences when we were younger and tended to make mistakes. I would love to make mistakes. Life can be much better known by mistakes, no body can learn wothout faults. Well done...

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 25, 2012
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