Fate's Path

Let's break my spirit one more time
Shatter my dreams until I'm blind
Can't seem to catch a break
Always making a mistake

Losing my hope
Stuck in a sinking boat
Nowhere to run
Can't even see the sun

Everyone is wearing a mask
I'm surrounded by a lying mass
I'm lost in a world of hate
Following a path laid out by fate

Reviews

[Day Dreamer]

I love this piece. Well done. Keep writing! :)

[I Am Svetlana]

I really like the rhyming in this...it really makes the poem flow nicely. Very nice imagery added throughout this piece. Great job.