These Tears

boyfriend broke up with me Tuesday night, i'm kinda depressed.

 

These tears are to you

These tears are because of you

These tears are my only reminder

Of how much I love you

Reviews

[Ally Baker]

I totally agree with Lia. I can completely understand the emtion inthis piece considering pretty much the exact same thing happened to me a little while ago. Guys can just be so heartless and like in the new movie, the Ugly Truth, their heart isn't anywhere in their upper bodies, rather somewhere where the sun don't shine.

[Nathan Noble]

short and to the point. emotional and honest. great work and i wish i could give u some productive advice but many great works were fueled by broken hearts.

[~AmateurWriter]

Very short. Very simple. Yet very emotional, deep, and expressive all in four short lines. Great poem.

[Jemma]

Very short.
Buty very emotional.
Great write.

[deeps]

Broken herts make the best writes.
This is well expressed. like it alot.

[Orlando Murcia]

Very short and simple with
a lot of hate yet love feeling

I liked this a lot
nice work

Orlando M

[Rebel_angel]

Simple yet the emotion is so strong and powerful. And whole story of so love all summed up in these simple but powerful words! Nice write.

[Wolfe Greytome]

Simple, yet more powerful because of its simplicity.

[black_rose_obsession]

it's simple and precious. I like it you can tell it has meaning and emotion.