A Thousand

A Thousand

A Poem by ..R.I.P..

If I had a thousand words...

I'd change a life

Smiles are better than a thousand words

Hugs are better than a thousand smiles

Kisses are better than a thousand hugs

If I had a thousand words, smiles, hugs, and kisses...

I'd change the world!

© 2009 ..R.I.P..


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Janik, this is beautiful, light, innocent, embracing, caring, hopeful, and sure to uplift every reader
both young and old, in all walks of life, as such words speak to the heart of the masses with empathy
and knowing from the heart, what it would take to change the world, what it would take to change a
life for the better and that being to dare to dream, hallmark couldn't write something as truthful
the metaphors bring your words to life, its a wonderful read, cute and meant to inspire, lovely..


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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this is beautiful. it's really good. thanks for sharing!
--Bella Rose

Posted 15 Years Ago


Wow, great! Although I don't think a kiss is worth 1000 hugs--maybe like 100, or unless its your first kiss or with someone you really love.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Janik, this is beautiful, light, innocent, embracing, caring, hopeful, and sure to uplift every reader
both young and old, in all walks of life, as such words speak to the heart of the masses with empathy
and knowing from the heart, what it would take to change the world, what it would take to change a
life for the better and that being to dare to dream, hallmark couldn't write something as truthful
the metaphors bring your words to life, its a wonderful read, cute and meant to inspire, lovely..


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lol, this was a cute and bubbly poem. Nicely done, brought a smile to my face.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

yay all the things I love well except some words they're long and confusing LOL great write and you can change the world=D
-E-man

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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