Just An Illusion

Just An Illusion

A Poem by ..R.I.P..
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Just had a messy break up with a guy I thought loved me.*crying uncontrollably*

"

I thought it was love

I thought you were true

But then I found out

It was just an illusion

 

I fell in love with you

And I really fell hard

But then you made me see

It was just an illusion 

© 2009 ..R.I.P..


Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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It is petty good, but I feel it ends too suddenly. I wish it was a bit longer.

Posted 6 Years Ago


aww I'm sorry for what happened and don't worry I'm sure you'll find someone else, just dont be too quick to fall, anyways this was a great piece of writing shows what your going through just regret what happened this really captures it wish you the best of luck
-E-man

Posted 15 Years Ago


and illusion.........that is all the world is is one big heartbreaking illusion until one comes along and breaks through it

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on June 2, 2009
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