Age Is Just A Number

Just speaking the truth.

Age is just a number

It can't stop us from being together

Age is just a number

Trying to stop us

Age is just a number

Putting limits on life

Age is just a number

It doesn't mean a thing to me

 

Reviews

[theludus]

Hey Janik, for me for you Janik [and I've read a few of these poems now, but not all]

you seem to convey strong feelings in an honest fashion... straight up, as it were, and yet with flourishes of style and getting your groove thing on. Your style, from what I've seen, is to keep things pretty close to the chest structurally, and I'd encourage you to try different styles, and forms of poetry, as this opens up the ways in which you can convey a msg.

Best to you.

Daniel

I don't mind how short it is. Honest, true, and straight to the point.

And I completely agree with what you're saying. I especially like the repetition of "age is just a number", because it's getting your point across.

[John A Common]

Yeah a prison number ;). No just kidding,your right love is love and age does not matter. Another very strong poem from you.

[Butterflymom]

Interesting piece! This is very honest, original and creative.

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Good idea, but I wish it was a longer piece. :]

Nice. ^^