My Journal..10 words

Written for a contest using the 10 words written in bold.

My Journal…10 words

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As I sat WRITING my JOURNAL

I EXPLAINED about my FAMILY

My younger brother was talking earlier

He said Janie HEAR me out

 

I sat tentatively and LISTENED

He pointed to the sky and

We talked about the PLANET

Looked at the amazing stars

 

He said some looked like EARS

Some PIECES of a jigsaw

I smiled as his innocence, and imagination 

INFINITE wisdom?

 

Author's Note

This is written for a contest using the 10 words in bold.

Reviews

[KAREN]

Great use of the words. Very heartfelt poem.

[Ruth]

This is wonderful and you have used the words well hon :) This is so touching :) xx

[M Garcia]

cool poem. good use of the words

[Helen Crutchett]

Awww, this was great! I loved it. A beautiful use of the "ten" indeed! Thanks for entering the contest! ~ Helena :)

[Marie Harrison]

Nice story!
Enjoyed your use of the words.

[Branch Isole]

Nice job.

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like the last stanza..infinite wisdom..is infinitely wisdom..