My Journal..10 words

Written for a contest using the 10 words written in bold.

My Journal…10 words

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As I sat WRITING my JOURNAL

I EXPLAINED about my FAMILY

My younger brother was talking earlier

He said Janie HEAR me out

 

I sat tentatively and LISTENED

He pointed to the sky and

We talked about the PLANET

Looked at the amazing stars

 

He said some looked like EARS

Some PIECES of a jigsaw

I smiled as his innocence, and imagination 

INFINITE wisdom?

 

Author's Note

This is written for a contest using the 10 words in bold.

Reviews

[Calypso]

This is cool. I have kept a journal for 7 years and I'm so glad I have.

[Yina]

Oooo I like:) You did great using those words:)

[Joshua Smit]

Brilliant, one often does not think of the candid wisdom hidden in the innocance of children

[Callista-Jade]

I liked it! Simple & cute. Good job.

[sarah]

this is really well written and very interesting

[angelina neves]

lovely!

[Nishant Gupta]

beautifully explained,nice efforts, read mine too " QUEST OF LIFE".

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Nice write meaningful bolds...thanks for sharing.......

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

Pretty cool.

[Jazique]

nice and hope you win because that was very creative as wisdom has no boundary well done.