I miss you...

I miss you...

 

 

 

 

 

 

I walked away

Without a second thought

I didn’t think I would miss you

How very wrong I was

 

I never could imagine

How much I could miss you

How much I would ache for you

How much you mean to me

 

You are my world

My world which has been torn apart

I now feel empty and numb

Alone and so, so lonely

 

I can’t get you out of my head

I can’t sleep or eat

I feel like you have died

But you are still so alive

 

I miss your smile

Your laughter

Your hugs and kisses

I miss everything about you

 

I don’t know why I walked away

I’m so sorry my darling

Please forgive me

I miss you so very much

 

Is this called love?

You know, I think it is..

I’ve never felt like this before

You are the love of my life

 

I want to wake up with you

Share everything with you

Will you be my soul mate?

I miss you…x

 

 

Reviews

[sarah]

I honestly feel like crying this is so sweet and honest and so full of heart and passion. Great GREAT! work

[Mauricio Montoya]

I know that feeling, nice work.

[KAREN]

Felt this one, the longing of wanting him back. Nice work!

[Nishant Gupta]

nice one read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE".

[Sweets]

This is so heartfelt.
I can relate to this =(
Just go for the straight path and no one will block your way :)
Great write!

[Liza]

such intensity of the longing in missing; missing a part of ourselves only ignited by one flame..

[MS. BABy]

i have done this...and it was awful...
i had to reclaim my crazy love back...smile..
great write

[Marie Harrison]

Very sweet poem filled with passion and longing.
Lovely!

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

A little cliche', but sweet nonetheless.

[Kathryn]

My favourite stanza was the last one :') It's so lovely :) In the middle I found that the flow faltered a tichy bit, but it was still sweet and beautiful and lovely :') Great job, well done :)