I miss you...

I miss you...

A Poem by JanieB

I miss you...

 

 

 

 

 

 

I walked away

Without a second thought

I didn’t think I would miss you

How very wrong I was

 

I never could imagine

How much I could miss you

How much I would ache for you

How much you mean to me

 

You are my world

My world which has been torn apart

I now feel empty and numb

Alone and so, so lonely

 

I can’t get you out of my head

I can’t sleep or eat

I feel like you have died

But you are still so alive

 

I miss your smile

Your laughter

Your hugs and kisses

I miss everything about you

 

I don’t know why I walked away

I’m so sorry my darling

Please forgive me

I miss you so very much

 

Is this called love?

You know, I think it is..

I’ve never felt like this before

You are the love of my life

 

I want to wake up with you

Share everything with you

Will you be my soul mate?

I miss you…x

 

 

© 2011 JanieB


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So sad and beautiful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This poem is great...in the subject matter. Emotional, sentimental. Hit the readers right on spot.
But I feel like this whole poem is also somewhat..excessive. redundant. Basically, I can summarize it: you left me empty, I dont know what to do without you, i'm sorry, i miss you. I dont get any vivid imagery to make it stick in my mind. Honestly, some figurative language would REAAALLY help :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great :) just loved it!!!! :) keep going!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Its really good!!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great write:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


How often we regret and rue the day we threw our love away, like refuse on a bonfire bright we so foolishly sacrificed that one thing that may have saved us....so very sad when hearts break. I hope it turns out well for you .

Posted 13 Years Ago


Some times it is just too late......this I know from experience and have held the memory in my heart for years,,Sad poem,,Kathie

Posted 13 Years Ago


am relating with this on this day very much.

very nicely done.
Antonio

Posted 13 Years Ago


Excellent!

Posted 13 Years Ago


very nice presentation, love and deep affection expressed beyond the formalities, good write......................

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on September 6, 2011
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JanieB
JanieB

Paphos, Europe, Cyprus



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I started writing in October '10. A real new bee to this world of writing. I currently live in Cyprus, where I have been since 2005. I am British, and have spent many years living abroad. Please j.. more..

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