Death beckons

A poem written specifically for a contest "Describe death in no more than ten words"

Death beckons

  

  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Angels call

Death beckons

Off to heaven

God is waiting..

Author's Note

A poem written specifically for a contest "Describe death in no more than ten words"

Reviews

[JanieB]

After the suggestion of 2 of my writer friends on here, I have swapped the first 2 lines..see what you think now?

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simple and perfect, need I say more, well done, good read.

[Kathryn]

I would probably switch the first two lines around myself, but it's really good :) nice job, well done :)

[Valentine]

Good lines..I would have reversed the first two though..still trying to use my left hand...it is a slow healing process..love kathie