Hate

Written about my ex. partner. Hate is not an emotion I am familiar with, I have got to the point where I feel it now.

Hate

 

Hate is a very strong word

Hate is an overwhelming feeling

Hate is uncontrollable

Hate, hate, hate..

 

Those pent up feelings

They eventually come out

Come out when you least expect it

Bang! Hate!

 

How can I hate someone so much?

How could I have got to this stage of anger?

When you think you can trust someone

Then they let you down so badly

 

Hurt you more than you could ever imagine

Words that send daggers to the heart

Lies and deceit so unimaginable

Hate! That’s what I feel..Hate!!

Author's Note

Hate is not an emotion that I am familar with, however, I have got to the point with my ex. partner.

Reviews

[PyroKitty24]

Unfortunately, everyone ends up feeling this sooner or later. When you have the ability to write about this feeling and move past it, you are a natural writer. I can tell that this is what you were trying to accomplish in your writing.
I can feel your emotion through this, which is what really makes a poem. But besides that I can also feel how the hatred slowly builds up throughout the poem. It starts by making me think this is just another poem about heartbreak and relationships, but I feel like this goes a bit deeper.
If I had to suggest something to make it better, I would say make it longer! I was disappointed by how short the poem was. I wanted more.

[KAREN]

I feel the anger! Well written and great flow!

[Linear]

In my heart there exists no hatred, but often a sadness when somebody let's me down, hatred will will eat you up, embitter you and dry you up.

Anger can be good but hatred is best left.

Good poem

[Callista-Jade]

This poem expresses the emotion very clearly. I agree, hate pushes everything out of your mind. I like this poem very much. I like how you kept hate as the main topic, but added hurt and anger to express it so very vibrantly. =)

[sugar]

hate is a very strong word XD i loved this and i think you got your point across well

[Marie Harrison]

Yes, it is surprising when you find yourself hating someone you loved so much.
The rage and strength of your own hate is shocking is surreal to experience.
It just consumes you, expecially when betrayal of any kind is involved.
But it wanes, like everything else with time.

Your poem's really drew a picture for me, reminding of my own hate that I
experienced once. It was so exhausting too, walking around with all of that
hate angst inside of me.