What a difference a day makes

What a difference a day makes

A Poem by JanieB

What a difference a day makes

 

When you look at life negatively

When everything seems so gloomy

When life doesn’t seem worth living

Then out of the blue something magical happens

 

Your world is turned upside down

Your thoughts become erratic

You look at life in a different way

You smile, and the world smiles with you

 

A breath of fresh air has entered your life

Blows you away so unexpectedly

You now look at life with the glass half full

Positive and happy thoughts always on your mind

 

A new love has come into your life

A miracle has really occurred

Brought you both together like magnets

This happiness is just so hard to explain

 

Who would have thought it?

This overwhelming feeling of love

Passion and intense feelings, so powerful

Embrace it with both arms, it doesn’t come along that often..

Enjoy J

 

 

© 2012 JanieB


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Real love is something to be treasured AND HUNG ONTO..BUT NOT TOO TIGHTLY OR IT WILL WANT TO FLY FREE..sMART GIRLS KNOW NOT TO TIE KNOTS TOO TIGHTLY..LOL..kATHIE

Posted 12 Years Ago


i agree with Mauricio Montoya !!! this one is really good !! :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


i like this one because life is what you make it, great job, well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very inspirational write, you can feel the power of the words through both tone and flow in this piece. Good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


heart written and shows how your new love brought hope to your life...i like the dark thoughts you wrote at the beginning because when you wrote about love it just seemed so obvious and pure...
keep the good work...and try to write in rhyme....so that the ear loves it as much as the heart

Posted 13 Years Ago


This warms the heart :) I love days like this. Thank you for sharing it and making me smile, it's a pleasant thought to start the day off right.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very heartfelt! Love is a blessing when you meet the right person, and it sounds like you have.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Excellent write. I take it things are going well?

Posted 13 Years Ago


I agree! great great write! I really enjoyed it

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is exactly what I needed to hear right now! Just amazingly beautiful!!:) I totally love it!!:)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on June 16, 2011
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JanieB
JanieB

Paphos, Europe, Cyprus



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I started writing in October '10. A real new bee to this world of writing. I currently live in Cyprus, where I have been since 2005. I am British, and have spent many years living abroad. Please j.. more..

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