You opened up my life

You opened up my life

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You opened up my world

My world full of despair

You took me to a place

A place where I felt free

 

Free from a life of destruction

Free from a life of pain

Free from a life of misery

To a place full of hope and happiness

 

How amazing those feelings were

Happiness like I’ve never felt

Caring that I’d never had

Love unimaginable

 

But now it has gone again

Back to being unhappy

Feeling worthless and in pain

Back to a life of misery

 

If only we hadn’t met

Then I wouldn’t know these feelings

Feelings I will never forget

Feelings I wish would return.

Reviews

[LA Lorena]

This asks the age old question...is it better to have love and lost or to have never known love at all. Sometimes, it is hard to know what the answer is. I'm still undecided myself. nicely done!

[Valentine]

Loves come and go through a persons lifetime..there are many people one can fall in love with if they take the time..some of the ones you wouldn't look at twice make the best husbands..Valentine

[KAREN]

A poem that is filled with sadness, then happiness, then sadness again. So many emotins flowing that the reader feels!

[Murtuza]

I like it, well-written!

[Joshua Smit]

wow... i love it, though i'm not very good at analysing love poems... it's something that im yet to experience