The seasons

Written for a contest..one has to use the words "Winteresque", "Springfelt", "Autumnal", "Summery", and 4 to 6 stanzas.

The Seasons

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The winteresque scene outside

Drew me to the window

Pure white snow lay upon the ground

As I stared at the beauty that beckoned.

 

Then the springfelt weather appeared one day

Little flowers like daffodils and bluebells

Lay like a carpet of yellow and blue

The rains started, and the grass started to grow.

 

The summery smell of the freshly cut grass

The sunshine, the warmth

The laughter, the picnics

The best days came then.

 

Autumnal days came

The leaves changed colours

Of the beautiful trees

That once were green.

 

We are blessed to have such beauty

Given to us to enjoy, breath in the air

Look all around you

And fill your hearts with happiness.

Author's Note

Written for a contest..one has to use the words "Winteresque", "Springfelt", "Autumnal", "Summery", and 4 to 6 stanzas.

Reviews

[Greg Skura]

Great imagery here!

[Cynthia]

Its just... Wonderful! The nature is deeply into this poem and I feel like feeling it inside me and now i'm standing here...feeling what the poem mentions...
Nice imagery of this poem! With or without this poem, its still the same, wonderful! I love how you use those four words to form a truly amazing poem!
The beauty of nature and this poem is clear, and its...beautiful.
Also, the photo you got had also helped readers to imagine better, and with the poem, it gives even more beauty to it!

Overall, I really love it, I love nature poems, how it bought us to real lifes again. Also, I love the ending!

[Valentine]

Wonderful and the pictures sets off the writing..Good going..Valentien

[Linear]

Dont care about the contest, this is a lovely poem, you take your reader on a swift yet lovely visit through a year, the picture adds to the overall feel

[KAREN]

Excellent job! Great flow and imagery, you painted a colorful picture!

[Rossen]

filled my heart with happiness!

[Moflo]

Very good imagery in this piece! Also, good job on using the 4 words, I think you did this nicely. Great write!