To you, my darling

A note left to a lover..

To you, my darling

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I want to end this

But don’t know how to

They say it’s cruel to be kind

But it’s so difficult to do.

 

You still mean the world to me

But the pain I feel is unbearable

I cry myself to sleep, if only you could see

I wake to the same feeling, so I know this is not meant to be.

 

I can’t live with you

What a dilemma I am in

Because I can’t live without you

The love of my life, and this must now end.

 

The tears stream down my face

As I write this note to you

I wish you all the best, and for you to find a new place

My heart now my darling, is totally broken in two.

Author's Note

Sometimes it is so difficult to end relationships..

Reviews

[Katannaism]

Oh dear God~this is truly saddening. It just moved me to tears. This is such a war piece! The emotion juxtaposed here is really wonderful. T^T

[Sweets]

I agree with you, it is really difficult to end relationships..especially when that person is gonna die. It's just so touching and heat-felt.
Great work!

[Akshat♥]

it is really hard to solve your relationship problems..
i really liked the emotions here..
poem is very sad..touching..

[Princess152]

gorgeous! Beautifully written

[Rose Masen]

Beautiful and heart breaking at the same time.

[Shalini Dinesh]

Its really hard to come out of relationships, this poem beautifully express how hard it is when a loved bond breaks....

[Linear]

It's always hard, and one gets hurt more than the other usually, great emotions used in this sad poem well written

[Aimee Mahathy]

Wow, I was totally in the same situation recently. Sad you couldn't work it out. :/
But yes, it's better to end things with a little love remaining rather than hate. :3

[Misty Blue Eyes]

oh i understand this very much. i am glad you wrote this. my ex boyfriend from high school ended it with me that was years ago but we remain friends to this day