Lovers

Menke.. 1 to 13 syllables in 13 lines

 

LOVERS

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

HELLO

MY FRIEND

HOW ARE YOU?

YOU’RE MY LOVER

YOU’RE MY EVERTHING

I ADORE YOU SO MUCH

YOU MAKE MY LIFE SO COMPLETE

DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU?

I WANT TO BE WITH YOU FOREVER

NOW YOU’RE HERE IN MY LIFE, PLEASE STAY WITH ME

LET’S HOLD EACH OTHER SO CLOSE, AND KISS ALL NIGHT

MY DARLING, MY HEAD IS SPINNING SO FAST IT HURTS

I’M ON BENDED KNEE, PLEASE WILL YOU MARRY ME BABES?

 

Author's Note

"Menke"..one to thirteen syllables, in thirteen lines.
Bit of a challenge..

Reviews

[Pickleby Davies]

This is such a cute little poem! Great job

[Linear]

You did well, though the term babes at the end kind of destroyed the feel of the poem for me, still thats just me, well done

[Aimee Mahathy]

This is great! I love experimenting with different forms.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Awesome work!

[KAREN]

So romantic! Beautiful!!

[Sunflower 20]

great! very romantic

[trainwreck]

This was fun to read. Good job! I love increasingly long lines. :D

[Arya_the_elven_lady]

Cooleio

[Ruth]

Interesting love :)
Beautiful dedication :)
xx

[luciddreamer]

Interesting style of writing...I like it...:)
Peace
Robin