The magical sea of wonder

The magical sea of wonder

A Poem by JanieB

The magical sea of wonder

 

 

 

 

 

 

The windsurfers tacking in the wind

The seagulls swooping down

The tourists swimming around

The ocean, a magical sea of wonder.

 

The wonder of what lies beneath

The strength of its waves

The reflection of the sun upon the crest

The ocean, a magical sea of wonder.

 

The joy it brings to one and all

The fear it throws at a few

The excitement and thrill

The ocean, a magical sea of wonder.

© 2011 JanieB


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Posted 3 Months Ago


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It draws one to it, the waves crashing against rocks the smell of ozone sand and salt mixed together, gritty sandwhiches on the beach, just wonderful and so is your poetic expression

Posted 13 Years Ago


Hah, I'm one of the few that fears it. XD I'm terribly afraid of the ocean. o.o Well, at least being in the deep parts. Too many scary things that could eat me down there! XD
Great poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Makes me want to close my eyes and be there, oh the peace! love the lines,
The ocean, a magical sea of wonder.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I'd love to swim in whatever ocean you're in.
I do do the ocean. Sharks scare the piss out of me.
I would also see what the darkness is. Let a few of the cold bars fly that live within your head.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nice. (: Makes one want to visit the ocean (and secretly I am terrified of the ocean). (= Lol.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think this one deserve to beat mine! Very nice job indeed

Posted 13 Years Ago


When ever I need to find peace or gather my thoughts I do it at the beach to the sounds of seagulls and ocean waves.
Excellent write.


Posted 13 Years Ago


The ocean always calls to me and I must absolutely agree that it is full of wonder. Do keep that pen flowing, Janie!

Posted 14 Years Ago


oohh... makes me think of cape town, how i want to live there...

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on November 14, 2010
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JanieB
JanieB

Paphos, Europe, Cyprus



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I started writing in October '10. A real new bee to this world of writing. I currently live in Cyprus, where I have been since 2005. I am British, and have spent many years living abroad. Please j.. more..

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