Sun

Haiku

Sun

 

Sunshine beams on me

The heat is quite amazing

I love the feeling.

Reviews

[Archia]

Oh this makes me wish it were sunny right now. I like what it is saying and I certainly agree with it.

[Linear]

And so do I
your poem is amazing bright
warm sunshine on face

[Chelsea]

Fan of haiku! I really like this. A well written poem about the sun. I love the sun as well. It's warm rays heat my heart for sure!
Awesome write!!!

[Aimee Mahathy]

This is really great! I can't say I agree with the statement, though. XD I hate the sun and its brightness and its heat. XD

[OT]

very uplifting and positive little haiku!! I liked it!

[luciddreamer]

Very nice write :)

Peace
Robin

[E.H. Monroe]

Was half expecting the traditional japanese twist at the end, like

but all things are dark.

you fooled me.

[Art Sun]

Isn't the Sun amazing...

nice work...

[Mason]

ALL HAIL THE GREAT STAR.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Nice,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,