Freshly scrubbed floor

 

Freshly scrubbed floor

 

Okay, so this the deal

No dragging chairs across me

No jumping up and down

No cats scratching on me

 

I’m gleaming you see

All polished and shining

No dust on me now

I look great I know

 

I smell so fresh

Been scrubbed with fair hands

Lovingly restored

To my former self

Thank you.

Reviews

[Invisible Ink]

I like it! The first stanza is my favorite, a floor with some attitude! Funny. I also like the word choice and image in the last stanza. I wonder where you are?

[tynamite]

I love it. It's cute and nice.

[Joshua Smit]

lol... very random, creative idea, i like it
but still the lack of punctuation :(
do u fear the coma ?

[Goodbye]

Very cute idea!

[Bunnycorn]

No coffee?! D: Very cool poem though :)

[sarah]

cool!

[Dark Empress]

cute, i like it :)

[Wondering Mind]

:) nicely done..

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now thats the kinda of floor I want...one who tells it like it is!

[justice]

Haha! This reminds me of my mother. Except, it is from the floors perspective... Fun, odd, and enjoyable. Taking a mundane task and putting a new spin on it is a great form of poetry. Thank you so much. You are a talented writer!