10 words

Stipulated 10 words to be used in no more than 40 word poem.

10 words

 

Looking out from my huge empire

The season changing

Rain is falling

Upon the dead, yellow moss

 

Snow Covering the frozen lake

Mist rolling over the valley beyond

Oh what a sight, now I feel such a fake

What empire?

Reviews

[Rory CJ Frankson]

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11 words

rolling yellow moss
covering dead fake
empire rains
in lake season.

It was a challenge, but I tried to make at least a stanza on the words given. Couldn't and added [in] & one [s]. It really makes no sense, as sometimes poetry doesn't appear to right away. Even less sometimes in free form Prose. I enjoyed the trying and really enjoyed your well written poem. I think I'll try within the 40 the make a recognizable pretext... Thanks for making me smile.

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[Desert Dreamer]

A great poem! Love the way you represent empire in this poem.

[Cassiopia Summers]

Pretty good imagery. :)

[Linear]

Looks good, sounds good, therefore it is good, I shall give it ten lol

[Aimee Mahathy]

Oh this is great! I loved the images here.

[Mauricio Montoya]

one word, Nice.

[luciddreamer]

well done :)

Peace
Robin

[KAREN]

The imagery is great! the poem is beautiful!!

[Nothing Personal]

Wow. I like the idea of constrained word poems and you did a great job managing/ restraining yourself there. And the last line was BINGO for me. Good Job..

[Goodbye]

This is absolutely excellent! Clap!, Clap!, Clap! I really enjoyed this one.

[Wondering Mind]

You did well with the challenge