In love

In love

 

Tears of joy

Running down my face

Seeing you lying there

The love of my life.

 

You make me so happy

With your cheeky smile

Your tender kisses

Caressing me.

 

The longing for your body

Next to mine

Holding me close

Oh how I love you.

 

I look deep into your eyes

I see such beauty

Such intense warmth envelopes me

Wrapping me up in what I call love.

Reviews

[Moflo]

I liked the feelings of this piece a lot, the reader can definitely pick up on the sensory images you use. Nicely written.

[Linear]

A sensual treat, to be so deeply in love was but a dream to me, how i do envy you

[Aimee Mahathy]

Aww, this is very sweet. I know these feelings well and you wrote of them perfectly.
Great job!

[Akshat♥]

nice poem..
love is so beatiful ..
you never knew what it holds in it..

[Valentine]

Sweet and very tender write..makes me think of my younger days..Valentine

[luciddreamer]

This piece brought back fond memories.....

Peace
Robin

[Mauricio Montoya]

it great to be in love. nice work.

[KAREN]

I love this poem. You expressed love so well, could feel it !

[Rebel Angel]

This made me smile for the pure fact it reminded me of how i feel. In the darkness there is love and this was so sweet. Thankyou!

[Arya_the_elven_lady]

I love it! I`m terrible at submitting helpful reviews, but I like it.