Love

Innocent love..

Love

The yearning pulling at my heart

Like an enormous pain

Deep within my soul

Pulling so, so hard.

 

I love you

Really..love you

From the bottom of my heart

What an amazingly powerful feeling.

 

I’ve never felt this before

Never felt the draw towards someone

So intensely before, like a magnet

Drawing me deeper and deeper.

 

I want to cry, I feel so happy

Happy to be part of your life

Hold my hand so tenderly

Pulling me closer to you, closer and closer.

 

My heart pounding

My knees weak

How can this be

The feeling of what they call love.

 

Reviews

[Dark Empress]

I like it, I think and although I do agree with Tate, I believe the closer and closer gives it a good feel. So all in all I enjoyed this very much :) Great write!

[justice]

You are definitely a "write from the heart" type of poet. I really enjoy the style and I really enjoy the poems that you have shared with me. Thank you!

[tizzy k]

i love it

[Marie Harrison]

Nothing like the feeling of falling in love with someone. It's scary but exciting too. Your want to run to them and from them at the same time~ Great poem describing love.

[Micheal Teal]

Evocative!

Well done. This is an authentic and honest poem that tugs at the heart strings. I fell your passion.

Bravo!

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

Simply Lovely BRAVO ! god bless lily

[Cassiopia Summers]

Awe, this is truly adorable. (:

[Tate Morgan]

Very nice if I have any critacism it is simply this in this quatrain
I’ve never felt this before

Never felt the draw towards someone

So intensely before, like a magnet

Drawing me deeper and deeper.

You break one of my own cardinal rules Never use the same word twice in the same quatrain such as the word before But other than that i rate it highly
tate