Autumn

Autumn

The wind whistles through the autumn leaves

So beautiful hanging onto their powerful trees

The trees which sway to and fro

The wind it has such a powerful blow.

 

The brown, green, yellow and orange

Such amazing autumnal colours

Makes the woods such a magical place

Full of splendour and beauty.

 

The carpet is laid upon the ground

Awaiting the children to run around

Running through the crackling sounds

Of the leaves below their little feet.

 

Oh the joy of their laughter

The smiles on their faces

Such a simple and amazing sight

The trees, and their leaves of autumn.

 

Reviews

[Cassie316]

It's really windy outside my house right now =) Good imagery!!!
this line doesn't sit with me right though...
The wind it has such a powerful blow.
maybe I have too dirty a mind..

[Tate Morgan]

Very well done