I'm afraid. I'm still paddling.

I'm afraid. I'm still paddling.

A Poem by JaniceKJ
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It's a phenomenon that always happens to people, even for me. Afraid of being afraid has leads me nothing but failure.

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In the middle of the sea,
paddling,
trying to catch my first wave.
I was scared
So, 
I missed it, I missed twice, I missed forth...

I'm still paddling,
Casting admiration
on the faces of completion
Waiting,
Slowly dying in the middle of the sea.

What a coward I am.

© 2016 JaniceKJ


Author's Note

JaniceKJ
English is my 2nd language. so if thr's any mistakes feel free to point it out ;)
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I think this is really clever, and enjoyed reading it,
Thanks for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hey this is really good. Though language is a barrier, ideas can never hide its beauty. Can I show you some corrections? By mail?

Posted 8 Years Ago


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JaniceKJ

8 Years Ago

hEY! thanks for reading ;) and YES pls show me my mistakes! thank you so much~

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Added on March 24, 2016
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Tags: poem, afraid, modern days, poetry, believe, faith

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JaniceKJ
JaniceKJ

Calgary, Alberta, Canada



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