Midnight Whispers

Listen.. can you hear it?

Enticing
Midnight whispers
Come and find me
Play with me
Enticing me

Gently now
Pulling at my senses
Whispering my name
Beckoning me
Come and find me

Alluring
Gently calling
Playing softly
Tempting
Beckoning me

Midnight whispers
Come and find me
Answering
Ever gently
I surrender to its touch

Author's Note

Playing with repeating rhythm

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Your words have their own allure, a beckoning smile, a welcome .. wonderful!

Can imagine this sung slowly, accompanied by Northumberland harp or lyre .. your words flow.

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[Dream Weaver]

Lovely flow from gentle to powerful.
Beautifully done....

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a haunting melody of sensual delights..the rhythm works really well..

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This is very beautiful, and mysterious at the same time. I loved the way you described and painted an image in my mind. Lovely! :)

[roy mccarthy]

beautiful write!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Magical and overt, a powerful rendition of hope and speed, well done, great read.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the softest tether luring the beauty~ lovely silken write~

[Robin]

such power in a whisper , even more in the midnight blue

[Liza]

close your eyes - midnight whispers are telling you the receipe of keeping the sense of surrender in waking dreams....