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Using WOTD vociferous [voh-sif-er-uhs]- crying out noisily, clamorous

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Vociferous tears

Dammed spillage from broken heart

Hurt heart overflow

Author's Note

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Reviews

[emmajoy]

Three lines beautifully worded, full of emotion, the saddest truth ..

[Liza]

excellent

[Ed Hart]

vociferous verse
written more better than worse
confined in bind, terse

[Robin]

an outpouring of emotion ~

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

elegant stream of tears~

[Inkcognito]

Dam(n) good!...let them flow, those vociferous tears of hearbroken truths. Beautiful!!