Love Whispers

For Quiet Listener

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Words of love and devotion

In peaceful solitude

Escape lover’s strings

 

Gentle breezes lift whispers

Along the tree line

Let them dance freely

In leafy tree tops

 

Eagle wing picks whispers up gently

Carry them along the way

Carefully lay

On river water

 

Bringing them along

Silent fishes move freely

With sweet words of love riding effortlessly

 

Gently

Gently

 

Dragon fly flutters away

With whispers

Tenderly placing

On swaying flower petal

 

Lightly

Lightly

 

Flower pollen words

Stirred by buzzing graceful bees

Lifted again into stratus sky

 

Ocean breeze gracefully gathers

Carries lovers whispers

To shore line

 

Seagull answers call to carry

Higher and higher

Kindly lays lovers words in pillowed cumulous

 

Cumulous calmly transforms to stratus

 

Feel the gentle rain

Lovers words fall softly

On the quiet listeners face

Sing gently in his ears

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

A soft tender rhythmical flow which rejuvenates
heart and soul flawlessly written!

[Goodbye]

I love that you mingle the song of nature with the song of Lovers.

So beautiful, that kind of love. Brava!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

such silken saturating tranquility to lean into this fine morning~

[Lucid Smile]

Passionate and Pretty. I love the picture, it is phenominal. I like how personal thoughts can travel the world and be recieved by the one who owned the thoughts in the first place.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

WOW this is one of your best , one of the most tender love poem I read for long long time , this last stanz is amaing :

Feel the gentle rain

Lovers words fall softly

On the quiet listeners face

Sing gently in his ears

[Ed Hart]

yes, love whispers, and one could just weep for the sweet joy of it...lovely write, lovely girl, lovely

[Robin]

such an beautiful journey of a whisper told through your words ~ elegant

[Jaidyn DeVoir]

A beautiful write my friend. So steady but graceful. Mellow.

You have such a way with words. That picture you used reminds me of some I took for my husband *giggles* but shhhh.....that's our secret.

With Love,

[Dream Weaver]

A eloquently strummed sonata in the key
Of “A major” harmonically pitched…
Sweet and soothing to the heart and mind...

[Cassie316]

I am actually surprised at how well the picture fits this poem. Did you come up with the poem first or use the picture for inspiration first?