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lol Selene. I think what she might mean is that just when you think you've got her figured out, she'll be something different. Or that if you try to tell her who or what to be, she'll be something else just to spite you. Although all that may just be my interpretation because that's how I am haha.
Either way, it's another great senryu from you, m'lady.
I completely agree with Naked Poet and that you were able to say "all that" with 12 words is a greater feat than most. Pretty sharp are you? it must be all that abuse you've filtered which allows you to be so condensed and precise. And in fact sounds like this may have been written for that guy, or gal who led you around, arm in arm like a golden calf for everyone to admire. Oh Hell, I like Naked Poets interpretation much better.
I agree with NP. Seems defiant. Strong stance! Keep yourself you (that's whyvwe love you!)
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lol Selene. I think what she might mean is that just when you think you've got her figured out, she'll be something different. Or that if you try to tell her who or what to be, she'll be something else just to spite you. Although all that may just be my interpretation because that's how I am haha.
Either way, it's another great senryu from you, m'lady.
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