Take It All Off

A Little Soul Searching

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Watching

Waiting

Wanting you

Patiently waiting for you

 

Alone together

Already bare

But before we get there

Will you

Take it all off?

 

Inhibition

Take it off, Darling

Unlace, unzip, unbutton it, leave it lying on the floor

 

Pride

Take it off, Darling

Unsnap, unclasp, unwrap it, throw it aside

 

Doubt

Take it off, Darling

Unpeel, undress, underneath it is where I want to go

 

Fear

Take it off, Darling

Unleash, unhinge, unwind it, take what belongs to only you

 

Regret

Take it off, Darling

Unlock, un-think, understanding your heart transcends

time and space

 

Let yourself fall into my atmosphere

Away from all your worry

Take if off, unmask it, unseal it

Reveal it

 

Again, I ask you

For your naked soul

Dive deeply into and through me

Take it all off, Darling

 

Tis there, inside your soul

I wait for you

Reviews

[Bubo]

Fabulous..........and what an erotic way to request a soul, loved the undressing of the emotions, and to wait for finally the one true meaning of love.

[Cynthia]

Amazing Write!
A wonderful write, I love it!
I love the way you present the poem!

[Anicca]

Brilliant, I loved the way you used all the different feelings as subtitles almost and the repetition of 'take it off darling' was lush. Thanks for sharing.

[Shellie]

Excellent, loved every single bit of it!!

[Dream Weaver]

Two words; "SIMPLY BRILLIANT"

[Goodbye]

This is so erotic, so loving, so...intimate. You are a wonderful find!

[David W Moore III]

unmask, a favorite motif of mine. how many masks do we wear to the public? how many, to our lovers? and how many do we not even realize we wear for ourselves? by the time we get old, we don't have room for them all and they are all so familiar, we don't even realize when we wear them.

[Pax Analog]

This a brilliant "strip tease" performance where it really counts.

With wit and a light yet profound touch you show what it's all about. Any lover of any gender, take heed.

Like, how many good-lookin' "baggage handlers" of all ages and genders do ya know? I've met a few.

Crisp, elegant poem as primer on being a naked soul lover.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very uninhibited and animalistic... I agree it is a stimulating poem... it is good to have those kinds of moments in life... keeps you young.

[Matthew Kult]

I do enjoy a poem that accomplishes a couple of things. First, you have a great flow, and meaning behind this. You look into yourself and find the real being underneath. Secondly, you get me all excited. :o)

With Love,

Jaidyn