Take It All Off

A Little Soul Searching

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Watching

Waiting

Wanting you

Patiently waiting for you

 

Alone together

Already bare

But before we get there

Will you

Take it all off?

 

Inhibition

Take it off, Darling

Unlace, unzip, unbutton it, leave it lying on the floor

 

Pride

Take it off, Darling

Unsnap, unclasp, unwrap it, throw it aside

 

Doubt

Take it off, Darling

Unpeel, undress, underneath it is where I want to go

 

Fear

Take it off, Darling

Unleash, unhinge, unwind it, take what belongs to only you

 

Regret

Take it off, Darling

Unlock, un-think, understanding your heart transcends

time and space

 

Let yourself fall into my atmosphere

Away from all your worry

Take if off, unmask it, unseal it

Reveal it

 

Again, I ask you

For your naked soul

Dive deeply into and through me

Take it all off, Darling

 

Tis there, inside your soul

I wait for you

Reviews

[AJ]

I have one word WOW!

[emmajoy]

What an incredible dance to love and all things passionate, your words plait themselves into a primeval somewhere until the end is a glorious beginning!
And now I need to just say 'wow' and relax into a long, long sigh.

[.]

wonderful write..so emotional

[luciddreamer]

Wow...what a wonderful write you have here....fantastic :)
Peace
Robin

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. The emotion to get free and release all fear and allow a journey into another person. So many strong and amazing lines. The poem is like a whisper to find paradise. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

I will , I will xx

[Jaidyn DeVoir]

I do enjoy a poem that accomplishes a couple of things. First, you have a great flow, and meaning behind this. You look into yourself and find the real being underneath. Secondly, you get me all excited. :o)

With Love,

Jaidyn

[YouoweYoupay]

Deep, straightforward, and pure. I liked the word-choice and categorization. Interesting write. Thanks for sharing.

-Wella.

[Shalini Dinesh]

This is a wonderful poem, the wordings are really good to read, and the last two lines makes it all....well done..

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Bravo! To go beyond the physical and ask that the intimate entanglement be free of all they could weigh down this cherished moment is extraordinary. The is true intimacy--true love. And only when you bare all can you say you have it. Exceptional.