Glimpse at the stop

Penned when the train stopped by a mesmerizing place...

Dark clouds when cover up
The infinite blue sky

Gentle breeze blowing past the huge mountains

Dew drops on the soft leaves

Gathered moisture over the green grass

Babbling sound raising down the stream

As the water flows past thousand little stones

Sun setting at the west
Makes shaky images on the crystal clear river

And the one standing over there
Knows not the magical power

Which emerges out of the nature
Lively pictures when falls infront of two sharp eyes...

Author's Note

Dive into there!!!
Criticisms are honestly welcomed...

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Traveling is the best way to get rid of boredom & glad that you're making it count for you. As the water flows past thousand little stones...

[Michael S]

Mesmerized by this write. Beautifully written. I loved how you created a vision for us through your writing. It must have been a spectacular view over there as it led to creation of this wonderful piece of poetry.
Well penned, Anindita :-)
Thanks for sharing.

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks a lot for your time reading nd enjoying...

[matrixmark]

Nice snapshot of stopping somehwere on a train. For evene though it was short, the descriptions are vivid and I can see how this place made you want to write.

I particulary like the babbling sounds raising down the stream bit. This place, where ever it was, just goes to show that inspiration comes from anywhwere. So glad you caputered it and put it on here.

Mark.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot sir for your kind words...

[Sikandar Khan]

Ohhhh You HAe Penned The BEautiful NAtural Scene Into Powerful Words With Sharpness........
But WHy You Stopped The Train.........

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for reading dear... The train stopped for there was another train passing. And it was some 10 mins while I stared out of the window and penned this....
keep visiting...

[Sikandar Khan]

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Occasional Writer......

[Anindita Janhabee]

haha... but I love writing while I travel..

[Sikandar Khan]

ohhhh I Like ..............

[Lorry]

Nicely captured Ani. I love when we get surprise views through no control of our own. While everyone else is being annoyed by the delay,it's nice just to sit back, accept where fate has brought you and dive in, just like you did here. Sometimes, we are just meant to see what we are usually too busy to look at, once you accept it, it's like a reset for the mind, as you slowly get immersed in the view.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for the very first review dear... highly appreciated...

[Lorry]

You are most welcome :)