Love beyond words

For my best friend's contest

Met you in the dark of night, when no one was at sight;

You seemed to possess something unique, creating a feel with light...

It was your honesty and love that attracted me towards you;

But it was more than just attraction I believe, when I saw your little innocent heart so true...

Author's Note

Wrote within 5 mins for submitting in my best friend's contest...

Reviews

[Manu]

Wow, Ani.
This is one beautiful write...literally love beyond words. Nice rhyming too :-)
Like you, your writes are sweet too.
Keep it up.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank u dear...
much appreciated...

[mercy party]

its a very sweet poem, as sweet as true friends. you were there when no one else was, that is beautiful thing.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for the kind words dear....

[Bala Gorthi]

I must say it is a very beautiful quickie then, Anindita. You are a brilliant natural writer.
I loved the content, the rhyme and the craft.
Well done. Thanks for sharing...

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much dear writer... Am glad to see your appreciation... highly appreciated... 😊

[Ashish]

Hmmm..
As expected from u...
Just four lines but conveying everything u want to say :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Am glad that you understood... thank you...

[Lorry]

Oh, we all need those true hearts in our lives Ani. Nicely captured.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you sir....
always appreciated!!!

[Lorry]

You're welcome dear :)