Unrequited...

The purest form of love

A seed never sown
A plant that had never grown
A quill in air just blown
Something intangible and unknown...

A dream dreamt every night
Each darkness removed by that light
Out of touch, out of sight
Shining like the star so bright...

A wish remaining unfulfilled forever
Sometimes it's okay to be like a river
Cool breeze around yet no shiver
A feeling bittersweet however...

A heart that is broken
Once which was happily stolen
Letting a life darken
With just few words spoken...

Author's Note

"Unrequited love is the purest form of love..."

Please feel the emotions within my words.....

Reviews

[KTizzle]

I definitely felt the sadness in your words. I thought you painted a lovely, pristine picture. I especially loved the first and third stanzas. The last line in the last stanza pinched my heart.

I can relate to this poem, having being in love with someone who cannot be with me. It is indeed like a flower that will never fully bloom.

-Jazz

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for your time reading ..... I appreciate your visit... yes, a flower that can never fully bloom.. because it's only a flower now. It's fragrance is the one who can't be with the flower...

[Dust That Drifts Throug..]

Wow. I felt the sadness and longing in each stanza. You did a great job at rhyming every line. I can vividly picture each line in my head. Very good work.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot dear writer for your time reading my work. I'll definitely read yours soon..

[Bala Gorthi]

Sometimes it's okay to be like a river..
Very beautifully written here Anindita! Thank you for sharing. I love reading your writes..

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so very much dear writer....
thanks for liking my writings... it's the only reason inspiring me to write..

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Very nice poem. It's so gentle and soothing sounding, but sad at the same time. I really liked it. Thank you for sharing.

[Anindita Janhabee]

I'm glad you liked this one..... keep visiting...

[Chris A Jones]

It's also the loneliest form of love. To give and never receive is the ultimate sacrifice in my opinion.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Yes... ultimate sacrifice... and to love is to sacrifice...
even this is true... well, sir, thank you for your time reading my new work...glad for your words..

[Chris A Jones]

my pleasure.

[lua]

there is such a beauty to your words, as though inspired by a love that will never bloom, never flourish and but part of it always resides within the broken heart and it will never be completely forgotten

[Anindita Janhabee]

You indeed caught my point and thanks for feeling the emotions... It's crazy how people fall but at the same time they stand.... they can't have something that's not meant for the one.... It's really very painful... But this is the true form of love you'll ever see. A true lover keeps loving no matter he gets the same in return or not.. like the sun shines every morning, no matter the clouds cover it or not...

[lua]

i agree completely, love is at the essence of a human, and no matter how harrowing it may become, it is too intense an emotion to ever subside, your sun analogy puts it perfectly

[Anindita Janhabee]

very true...thank you..