Unrequited...

The purest form of love

A seed never sown
A plant that had never grown
A quill in air just blown
Something intangible and unknown...

A dream dreamt every night
Each darkness removed by that light
Out of touch, out of sight
Shining like the star so bright...

A wish remaining unfulfilled forever
Sometimes it's okay to be like a river
Cool breeze around yet no shiver
A feeling bittersweet however...

A heart that is broken
Once which was happily stolen
Letting a life darken
With just few words spoken...

Author's Note

"Unrequited love is the purest form of love..."

Please feel the emotions within my words.....

Reviews

[KTizzle]

I definitely felt the sadness in your words. I thought you painted a lovely, pristine picture. I especially loved the first and third stanzas. The last line in the last stanza pinched my heart.

I can relate to this poem, having being in love with someone who cannot be with me. It is indeed like a flower that will never fully bloom.

-Jazz

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for your time reading ..... I appreciate your visit... yes, a flower that can never fully bloom.. because it's only a flower now. It's fragrance is the one who can't be with the flower...

[Manisha]

It's a very sweet and beautiful piece
Perfect description of love my friend...
thank u jannu for sharing such a amazing poetry of love.......

[Anindita Janhabee]

Oh Mannu... glad to see ur review.... thank u....

[shubhajit]

This poem is related to my life's unpleasant moments.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Am sorry to hear... may you get strength to overcome all your hurdles dear... stay blessed nd thanks for reading...

[Surya]

Woww, one can hear the emotions behind it, I did.
Thank you for sharing, Anindita..

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so very much my dear........

[Surya]

It's my pleasure reading a grt piece, From u, And that cheered me up.

[Anindita Janhabee]

It's my pleasure indeed...

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Feelings flow and imagery appears so freely with this poem. I loved the last stanza, wonderful end. Tyfs

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot dear reader... Glad for your visit...

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're most welcome.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Beautifully penned.
There is a sadness the echo of which can be heard in every stanza.
Having said that, love is always pure.
Unrequited love is one that has not reached the pinnacle of fulfillment.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Very true sir... Unrequited one is pure...
And yes, thank you so much for your time reading my work...

[Ayushi Beura]

Your poem is so expressive that I really felt the emotions within ur words...
Rhyming scheme is awesome
n as per ur writing "A dream dreamt every night
Each darkness removed by that light
Out of touch, out of sight
Shining like the star so bright... "is so beautiful
expresses emotion and an untold tale:)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you dear... for your wonderful words.. am glad that you could relate......

[Ayushi Beura]

my pleasure to read your writes

[Ashish]

Words are sufficient to tell the emotions...
Emotional poem...
Keep smiling...

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thnk u 🍎🐻

[Great Aunt Astri]

OH the trials and tribulations of young love!!!! I remember it well. I like your formal approach to this poem. and your use of similes. I think the meter could do with a bit more work. Otherwise ...loved it.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks dear... am glad for your visit...

[Kesha]

A very sad but beautiful peice, I feel like the last line really summed everything up perfectly. Nicely penned

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for the visit...
Glad to see your kind words...

[Kesha]

You're welcome

[Fly]

It was nice. Accha laga padh kar. Google ne zyada madat karti to search the meanings of some uncommon words. 👍

[Anindita Janhabee]

thank u for the visit..

[Fly]

Welcome Ji koi gal nahi