Unrequited...

The purest form of love

A seed never sown
A plant that had never grown
A quill in air just blown
Something intangible and unknown...

A dream dreamt every night
Each darkness removed by that light
Out of touch, out of sight
Shining like the star so bright...

A wish remaining unfulfilled forever
Sometimes it's okay to be like a river
Cool breeze around yet no shiver
A feeling bittersweet however...

A heart that is broken
Once which was happily stolen
Letting a life darken
With just few words spoken...

Author's Note

"Unrequited love is the purest form of love..."

Please feel the emotions within my words.....

Reviews

[KTizzle]

I definitely felt the sadness in your words. I thought you painted a lovely, pristine picture. I especially loved the first and third stanzas. The last line in the last stanza pinched my heart.

I can relate to this poem, having being in love with someone who cannot be with me. It is indeed like a flower that will never fully bloom.

-Jazz

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for your time reading ..... I appreciate your visit... yes, a flower that can never fully bloom.. because it's only a flower now. It's fragrance is the one who can't be with the flower...

[Deep]

"Sometimes it's okay to be like a river ", nice poem, and surely I felt the emotions within these words. Wonderful poem

[Unknown Poet]

very nice ,
each and every words passed through my life ,

A wish remaining unfulfilled forever
Sometimes it's okay to be like a river
Cool breeze around yet no shiver
A feeling bittersweet however...

A heart that is broken
Once which was happily stolen
Letting a life darken
With just few words spoken...

thank you for sharing

[Lorry]

You it the nail on the head with the use of the word bittersweet Ani. Beautifully crafted piece that we can all find pieces of ourselves in.

[Mr.Writer]

Great job!! :)) I loved this poem!

[Hema Santra]

Beautifully expressed thoughts.

[APOORVA]

wow..
a completely blown away feel..
i read this twice, drenched in love and emotions
god bless the writer

[Sasha]

Nicely written emotions. Good one.

[Michael S]

Beautifully expressed Unrequited Love...
I liked it a lot...Simple pieces sometimes touch the heart and it is one of them.
Good work :-)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks dear for your visit...
much appreciated...

[Johnny Dep]

I deeply felt the emotions behind your write, these characters attracted me, I want to know about you writer, Anindita Janhabee..
Beautiful write.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot dear... great honour ... haha... thanks a lot ...