Come let's hide...

Just my way to imaginations

Come let's hide...
Across the ocean
Beyond the sea,
Beneath the infinite sky
Just you and me.

Come let's hide...
Top of the mountain
Under the tree,
By the seashore
Just you and me.

Come let's hide...
On the moon
Folding hand to knee,
Behind the sun
Just you and me.

Come let's hide...
Towards the fields
Setting the hearts free,
Underneath the rainbow
Just you and me.

Come let's hide...
Along the lake
With utmost glee,
Up the clouds
Just you and me.

Come let's hide...
Above the hills
With three words to agree,
Beside the waterfall
Just you and me.

Come let's hide...
Around the valley
Blessed by the almighty,
Inside a sweet little hut
Just you and me.

Author's Note

Deep into my imaginations...

Reviews

[Manisha]

Another great poem....
This is exceptional, I think this may be my new fav of yours. Beautifully honest, and so moving.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot cutie!!!!!!!

[Lorry]

Love both the playfulness of the piece and the seriousness of having that special person to share all the fun filled adventures in life with. It is in the sharing that these things become adventures, with all seeing the adventures, but the only ones to know it truly, are the both of you, where smiles say more than words. Love it.

[Anindita Janhabee]

So beautiful words..... thank you so much!!!!!! much appreciated....

[Ted Kniffen]

Well done. There was good flow to this. The structure worked well. The first line...come let's hide...is a good opening line. I see from your bio that you are 15 yrs old. You are off to a good start, keep working on those imaginations. Good write

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for your warm visit... highly appreciated... Will surely keep writing... thanks again...

[Bala Gorthi]

Beautifully written, Aninidita!
This feeling fill us many a time, especially when in love. This poem takes us to all beautiful places one can think of...
Thank you for sharing this brilliantly crafted write...

[Anindita Janhabee]

Very true...
Thank you so much for the visit.... always appreciated...

[Chris A Jones]

Elegantly written. The flow of the poem was perfectly timed. If we could put background music to the words, I think this could make a great song.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much... glad you liked it...

[Kuldeep desai]

i loved the flow of this poem..........it's so sweet and cozy to read.........actually i couldn't resist to read it with a tune i was like singing.......imaginations is too deep at some place actually i couldn't even reach.... :D

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much for stopping by........so glad you liked it!!!!!!

[Tazeen Ahmed]

I admire your writing for crafting with imagination!
the way you have expressed the consent of hiding with your beloved!

[Anindita Janhabee]

I'm glad you like my way to imaginations....... just close your eyes and pen down what you see with your closed eyes. That's what I call imaginations... when you close your eyes, you open the door of your heart... and words come out from your heart...
thanks a lot for your visit...

[Tazeen Ahmed]

You're very welcome!!

[Unknown Poet]

Very Nice
While reading made me smile...
Cute Romantic imagination ....

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you for the visit. ....glad to see you after long time...

[Ashish]

Nice poem Ani!
Writing about different imaginations with jiggling words.
I love first stanza most :)

Thanks for sharing

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much for first review... tumara bohut bohut dhanyabaad...

[Ashish]

My pleasure :)