"Come let's hide...
Around the valley
Blessed by the almighty,
Inside a sweet little hut
Just you and me"..
Just you and me, i liked these lines...
And the rest as beautiful as you sweetie,..
A sweet poem, and a beautiful scenery you created here, is just......ok no words,,,..
Waiting for more from you.
Thank you for sharing, Ani, if u admit me calling Ani..Haha
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thanks a lot for your wonderful words dear.... am glad to see your views..... thank u...
A very lovely view of escaping the world with your love. Keep the light hearted fun view of escape as your life unfolds before your eyes. May you find peace and happiness in all your days.
Heartwarming imbued with beautiful imaginations, like escaping into a serene world, full of vibrant hues, tranquility and with the special person making it a timeless world. So soft and calming. Lovely write.
Sweet poem and this gives a warm feeling to readers. It flows really well and rhythm is good too.
On whole this is a beautiful write :-)
Everyone when in love wants to hide from this world and feels everything is like a fantasy.
Keep up this innocence in your writing.
"Writing as a part of my day seems to be the best hobby. And as a part of my life seems to be the perfect partner..."
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