🍃The Autumn song🍁

Once I sang the autumn song...

----THE AUTUMN SONG----

Season of wonder
Nature's beauty fonder
Trees, green to gold
Autumn with the cold...
🍂🍂🍂🍂🍂
When flowers of summer wept
Winter arrived with its promise kept
Leaves falling on the ground
Made a rustling-crunching sound...
🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀
Light blue sky
When little birds fly by
Seems to create a way
For the little travellers starting a good day...
🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁
Mountains standing strong
Listen to the new wind's song
Ripples on the sea
Could feel the utmost glee...
🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃
I sit under the maple tree
Chewing my favourite toffee
When a new poetry strikes my mind
And finally a new road I did find...

Author's Note

Just a bit close to nature............

Reviews

[Sikandar Khan]

Buddy That Cool Autumn Song

[Anindita Janhabee]

thanks for reading

[Johnny Dep]

Perfect description of seasons and about you.
Thank you for sharing beautiful write Aninditha

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you dear for your time..

[Johnny Dep]

You are welcome.

[Lorry]

It's amazing what dances through the mind while sitting under a tree, you can actually feel the cookies being deleted from your mind, as the scenery unfolds around you. Nicely captured Ani, I could almost feel the breeze on my face :)

[Inject Positivity]

Peaceful write Anindita. Poetry is at its best when it creates imagery in the mind of the reader or at least leaves an effect in the mind that the reader could cherish for a bit, that is exactly what your poem did. I have enjoyed the different natural elements you have used here to create an atmosphere of peace and inspiration. Good job on rhyming too... Well done...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much Mr positive... for your wonderful words and warm read......am glad...

[D Connolly]

I imagine being under the tree eating toffee! Watching the seasons change is so nice, although its been a while since I've seen a change in seasons. We don't get any changes here in the tropics unless you count hurricane season LOL! I love your view on the world Ani, keep it up

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for the visit ma'am..... much appreciated as usual...

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot for the visit ma'am..... much appreciated as usual...

[matrixmark]

Such powerful and yet very calming and soothing imagery you have given here. Your work flows like a charm.

Mark.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much for your first visit ... Am glad you enjoyed it. I hope you'll like my other works too..

[Bala Gorthi]

Very beautifully written, Anindita!
When a new poetry strikes my mind
Suddenly a new road I did find..beautiful lines indeed.
You laced it with beautiful rhymes.. Thanks for sharing this write.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much. Your views are always appreciated... Am glad you liked those lines...

[Giulia King]

Lovely piece! This would be perfect in a childrens book :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

i love children by the way...
thank u so much....

[Dust That Drifts Throug..]

Nice poem. The feelings and thoughts of nature. You captured the thoughts of autumn perfectly.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks for your time reading my little work....

[Gladys]

I really enjoyed this poem! Great imagery, rhythm and rhyme. I also really liked the little pictures haha :D

[Anindita Janhabee]

Haha. thank u so much for your first visit, glad u liked it...