- - Boundless love - -

Cause love has no bounds...

I too love you…

I just don’t know how to begin

Also have no idea how did it happen,

Just three days of our meeting

And those three magical words have wrapped in…

Oh what a pleasure I get talking to you

And your cute smile that glows,

Has taken away my hunger and sleep

Just the perfect love it shows…

Isn’t it strange about the co-incidence?

That we both conveyed the same thing,

To each other overnight; I was awestruck

At your charming, loving and emotional being…

The only thing I desire for

Is your promise to be together forever,

Whatever may come along the way

I promise to care and endeavour…

Just can’t thank you enough

For binding this broken heart of mine,

I hope through this poetry

My love for you does shine…

When I say that I do admire you

Please feel it’s true and honest,

You are the one so sweet and kind

I always want to call the closest…

Whenever I say you goodbye

Please accept it without any sort of cry,

Because that will be the day

When I will die…

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I hope the message gets into the heart...
Thank you for your warm reads...

Reviews

[Manisha]

This is wonderful. I really think this show how much you care about him. This flows a greatly.
YOU DID A VERY NICE JOB......

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks for reading!!! my bestie...

[Nwang]

A cute romantic poem. It was nice and innocent. Enjoyed reading it. Nice write

[Anindita Janhabee]

Again you are on time reviewing my work... Thank you so much my friend, well, you do know for whom it's written...
It's a pleasure reading ur reviews... : )
Anindita : )

[barleygirl]

First and foremost, I must comment on your lovely profile picture! You are so pretty! I was thinking you look young & so I checked to see that you are 15. Your beautifully written love poem sounds like something written by a younger person. At age 60, I have to admit, I've forgotten how this simple form of love attraction feels. I think you've shown us the childlike innocence & the simple optimism which seems to be missing from so many love experiences for younger people these days. It's refreshing to be reminded of when love could be so sweet & satisfying. To tell you the truth, I'm sick of the way so much love is portrayed in a more sexual and/or hurting way, these days. It's nice to see it from your point of view again, which I think is rare for many young people these days.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Yes ma'am you got me right...
Thanks for commenting on the pic. I wanted to convey two things through this poem. First, all that feelings written for that special person and second, to all of you, that even today love like this does exist. Not all are infatuation... true love still resides. And distance doesn't matter when love is honest. And the truth that you have told about the way love is portrayed these days is really ridiculous...
People have made it a game.. Yes! a game... But I think we shouldn't go that way bcz we do know what true love and it's miracle is...
thanks a lot for your kind words...
Anindita : )

[Quinn W]

This is so sweet and romantic. You can really feel the love in it. It brings out the innocence and ignorance that love can bring into a relationship. Really beautiful. Definitely going on my favorites shelf.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much dear writer...
I think for the first time my work's a favourite one... Oh I'm so grateful for your warm review... I'll be reading yours soon...
Anindita : )

[brian]

Very cute. I like it; it resonated with me..that feeling/emotional high you get when you are with someone you like or love. Sweet and sentimental.. Maybe check out my poem about Love. It reminds me of this. (=

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much sir for the first review... so glad for it. ..
sure I'll be reading yours very soon...
: ) I'm glad you could relate : )