- - Boundless love - -

Cause love has no bounds...

I too love you…

I just don’t know how to begin

Also have no idea how did it happen,

Just three days of our meeting

And those three magical words have wrapped in…

Oh what a pleasure I get talking to you

And your cute smile that glows,

Has taken away my hunger and sleep

Just the perfect love it shows…

Isn’t it strange about the co-incidence?

That we both conveyed the same thing,

To each other overnight; I was awestruck

At your charming, loving and emotional being…

The only thing I desire for

Is your promise to be together forever,

Whatever may come along the way

I promise to care and endeavour…

Just can’t thank you enough

For binding this broken heart of mine,

I hope through this poetry

My love for you does shine…

When I say that I do admire you

Please feel it’s true and honest,

You are the one so sweet and kind

I always want to call the closest…

Whenever I say you goodbye

Please accept it without any sort of cry,

Because that will be the day

When I will die…

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I hope the message gets into the heart...
Thank you for your warm reads...

Reviews

[Shabeeh Haider]

I hope there will be no good bye. Love endures every storm.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you for your time reading my work sir...

[Shabeeh Haider]

Most welcome

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love that lasts forever...it will last to eternity---doesn't stop at physical death.....as Celine Deon sang...
"my heart will go on"

[Anindita Janhabee]

Yes so true sir...
Thanks for the kind words...

[Ayushi Beura]

The outstanding imagery in this romantic love poem is enhanced by the way you represented it.
Your choice of words and the flow were both nicely done as well as the strucutre. Amazing Job.
Keep up the outstanding work.
In other words I love it

Thanks for sharing

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you Ayushi....
Glad you liked my work...
yes, your encouragement keeps me going...😃

[Ayushi Beura]

My pleasure...you deserve that

[horizon]

Seems as if you adore someone truly...it is an awesome poetry...I can feel every word of yours...great

[Anindita Janhabee]

Yes, truly....
thank you😃

[Coyote Poetry]

Kind, gentle and hopeful words dear poet.
"When I say that I do admire you
Please feel it’s true and honest,
You are the one so sweet and kind
I always want to call the closest…"
The above lines stood out to me. Finding someone with same willing heart. A rare gift in a long life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thanks a lot sir, for the kind and warm review... I'm glad you did like my work...😊

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Poet.

[Sudeep Mishra]

Last line! Awesome.
This shows your soul is lovely and your mind knows the true value of love.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you Sudeep...
Yes, the last parah is my favorite too..😃
Thanks a lot for the read!!!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

I like the way your poem tells a story like a prose but doesn't lose its poetry if you know what I mean.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Yes I get it... By the way, I like 'story within a poem' so I always try out for that. ...
I'm glad you liked this little technique of mine... Thank you!!!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

I like them too. Most of my poems have them. You're most welcome.

[Bala Gorthi]

A very lovely poem on love for the love you feel a very very special person. There is also some beautiful rhyming in this poem. Love itself is an amazing phenomenon. The last stanza is very touching
To be able to express those sincere feelings this well shows great literary skills. I am amazed to see this poetry from a girl of your age. Take a bow from me for this write Anindita .
Reading your poetry is pure pleasure.
Keep writing. Your poems are very refreshing like the natures' showers.
Thanks for sharing. :-):-):-):-)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Oh my goodness sir, I think the review is something more for me... I heartily appreciate the words you've put in here for my poetry. As you said, love is such an amazing feeling... so it's always a nice time writing about such relations. Above all, it was a dedication, yes, to the very special one.. I am grateful to hear that you like reading my poems... a big thanks again!!! : )

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Amazing poem I like the last stanzas very much. Love has to be like that :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

You're right!!! thanks for the warm visit my friend...

[Lorry]

You hit the nail on the head when you mentioned coincidence. When fate shines upon us, it always looks for the strongest connections and always manages to find some familiar territory to get the ball rolling, it is only then that you begin noticing how many coincidences you have and that only builds a bigger target for cupids bow to take aim at. :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Thank you so much for your time dear... yes, the coincidence... it's never forgettable... it's the biggest in my life...
I am glad that this poem touched your heart... : )